"The elevator, which had haunted its untidy shaft for a hundred years, came wafting skyward, dragging its ungodly chains and dread intestines after. The door exhaled open. The lift groaned as if we had trod its stomach. In a great protestation of ennui, the ghost sank back toward earth." -Green Shadows, White Whale
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This looks really funny. Sidenote: shot on Red.
But only if the 'punctuation' makes 'sense'. Beware of too many. (my reflection on my genius daughter's editing experience!)
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